Essay-Focused MBA Package

Essay-Focused MBA Package

Offered by Ben L.

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Stanford GSB '21 | Essay Expert | Ex-McKinsey, Policy, Speechwriting

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Studied at Stanford Graduate School of Business

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Worked at McKinsey & Company

Package Description:

Since packages can be a little vague, I like to break down exactly what I offer in this essay-focused package: Reviews: • Unlimited essay drafts & revisions: I don't like limiting people on this — we're going to work on them until they're ready to submit. These essays have evolved into the most significant part of the application, and short-changing those isn't an option in my book. As a former speechwriter, I also don't know how to leave a piece of writing unfinished. • For example, for GSB, you would get unlimited reviews of the: (i) What Matters Most Essay (ii) Why GSB Essay (iii) GSB's 3 Impact Essays Sessions: • A 90-minute personalized 1:1 essay workshop: this is a 50-slide class I prepped for Leland which received a good deal of positive feedback in my 10-12-group sessions, so I decided to turn this into a 1:1 offering. This will help get you started, and you'll see example essays that bring out best practices for tackling MBA essays (with an added focus on GSB as well) System-level / project management • Timeline trackiing & deadlines: we'll set deadlines to meet for each item on this list and I'll put together a project tracker to see how we're mapping against our goals / check off items as we progress • MBA folder / organization: to keep things in one place, I suggest all the documents be stored in an MBA folder (where you'll share access with me via Google Drive) by school, with a sub-folder for each application piece (e.g., recs, essays, additional questions). I prefer using Word docs that we save for each of your essays (to keep tabs on old drafts in case we want to recycle materials), but the remainder of the content can be Google Docs since we want to avoid any version control issues. • Turnaround time: 48-hour turnaround time is my general M.O. for a given document that you send through, though many of them I can get back to you more quickly. If I need more time because of a particularly busy work week or travel (e.g., weddings, family, etc.), I'll be sure to let you know — but 48-hour turnaround I can guarantee 90-95% of the time. This stuff has always been easy to work around — keeping lines of communication open is the key • Feedback / iterating as we go: if at any point, you have thoughts on how to make the process of working together faster, easier, simpler — just let me know. If something isn't working for you in how things are going, I'm just a call away. There are a million individual pieces to this process, and it can sometimes be a bit frustating or overwhelming as you discover there's potentially more work than meets the eye. Every single person I've worked with has found it psychologically taxing at some point or another — this is probably the most important part of being your coach. I'll be sure to check in proactively, but please don't sit on something if you're feeling it. We'll work together and figure it out — I promise there's a very good chance I've dealt with it before, and if I haven't, I'll get advice from fellow coaches who have. If there's anything you have questions on or want to incorporate here, we can adjust this process to make it work for you. I'm always open to suggestions. Drop me a line whenever you're ready for an initial conversation.


What you'll get from this package

An essay writing workshop to get you off the ground, help you brainstorm, and formulate your initial ideas to set the foundation for your essay

Unlimited essay reviews (e.g., Stanford's 'What matters most & why essay) and thought partnership to shape a compelling, reflective narrative


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions and .

My goal is to be super-flexible, and my hope is that the process I lay out here can serve as a helpful starting point. It's important to remember that you'll still need to put in real time and effort throughout this process, but I'll serve as both a guiding hand as questions come up, and someone who will get really tactical with you as we create a compelling set of materials to get into your top-choice programs. Ultimately, I'll help you go from sounding like an applicant to sounding like an alumni. Excited to work together — don't hesitate to reach out.

Refund Policy
6 months to use after purchase

Important note on capacity and application rounds: unless otherwise specified and explicitly agreed, this package is for a single round. If extenuating circumstances arise, it will still need to be agreed upon by both myself and you as an applicant to shift to a later round / cycle. For example, if you (as the applicant) state that you're applying during Round 1 for a given MBA cycle, shifting to Round 2 will have to be agreed on by (a) me as your coach and (b) you as the applicant. If I do not have capacity for shifting, it is your responsibility to make the absolute most of your coaching during the application cycle (e.g., Round 1) for which you initially agreed to apply. I'm fully here to help you make the most of every piece of your application, but I also have the reality of running my own business outside of Leland, and it's essential that I can balance capacity. I work with a set number of folks each cycle, and want to be sure I can give tangible support to everyone I work with -- to that end, it's only fair I make sure any given cycle doesn't stretch me too thin. This comes from a place of wanting to be fully dedicated to everyone I work with, and providing transparency on my own capacity for each and every MBA cycle. Turnaround time: 48-72 hour turnaround time is my general M.O. for a given document that you send through, though many of them I can get back to you more quickly. If I need more time because of a particularly busy work week or travel (e.g., weddings, family, etc.), I'll be sure to let you know — but 48-hour turnaround I can guarantee 90% of the time. This stuff has always been easy to work around — keeping lines of communication open is the key.

Services included:

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Essays


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Ben L.

Offered by Ben L.

Joined February 2022

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Stanford GSB '21 | Essay Expert | Ex-McKinsey, Policy, Speechwriting

MBA COACHING, WRITING EXPERTISE & GMAT WORK • Stanford GSB Alum, Class of 2021 -- see relevant experience sets below: • Coaching | Advised multiple admits into Stanford GSB, HBS, Wharton, Kellogg, MIT Sloan, INSEAD, Haas, and more (see >20 Leland reviews), while teaching multiple courses through Leland • Professional Writing | Speechwriting in public policy & political environments, Lead Editor for Nondisclosure (Stanford GSB's magazine) and Managing Editor for the Stanford International Policy Review • GMAT / Test-Taking | Scored in the highest percentile of GMAT test-takers, but more importantly I've honed my ability to help others extrapolate top test-testing strategies in the areas they're weakest • Interview Training | I'm interview-trained for McKinsey, allowing me to give high-quality mock interviews for MBBs and any MBA program • Additional Writing | Crafting op-eds, ghostwriting for major publications, developing a fictional short story collection, policy deep dives, a book on chess applications to life, and application essays of all sorts CAREER • What I'm Doing Now | Based in NYC working on a stealth, marketplace startup while continuing various forms of advisory work • Public Policy | Prior to Stanford, worked on the Policy Team for the Chicago Mayor's Office under Mayor Rahm Emanuel, focusing on 5G infrastructure policy, criminal justice policy, and citywide corporate/economic development deals • McKinsey | Before policy, worked at McKinsey & Co , with casework focused on job training for the formerly incarcerated and workforce development for at-risk youth • PE / VC / Startup Advising | After Stanford, worked in Bain's Private Equity Group on various due diliegences, managed deals with several venture capital firms, and advised multiple startups on growth and go-to-market strategy

200+ people coached for MBA

Open to working with clients outside the U.S.

Starting at $3,600

15h+ of coaching

 
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